tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10722111911442589.post5009413487454025791..comments2023-09-11T04:28:51.223-07:00Comments on Writings, Musings & Other Such Nonsense: Oh Look... A Query...Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10722111911442589.post-4080537306870713412010-05-01T02:15:45.921-07:002010-05-01T02:15:45.921-07:00Thanks Talli! I am working on it at the moment. ...Thanks Talli! I am working on it at the moment. I've been given some suggestions and am tweaking it. Hopefully I will be able to post the newer one soon and have you all rip that instead. ;)<br />I am not a query writer... this was my first attempt ever. So we'll see...we will see. :DMel Chesleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08200734886454147170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10722111911442589.post-49034988231694563412010-05-01T02:04:06.040-07:002010-05-01T02:04:06.040-07:00Congrats on almost 100!
Your book sounds really ...Congrats on almost 100! <br /><br />Your book sounds really interesting! If you don't mind me sticking my nose in, I might suggest removing the first sentence and starting right away with your story pitch. Have you checked out the blog QueryShark by Janet Reid (Google it and it will come up). Of course she's just one agent but she always recommends launcing straight into the story. <br /><br />Aren't queries fun... NOT! Good luck - keep us posted!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10722111911442589.post-8605003999134786352010-04-30T22:23:05.174-07:002010-04-30T22:23:05.174-07:00Yes'm. :D That is the very first one I crank...Yes'm. :D That is the very first one I cranked out. I have since tweaked it a bit, then began working on some suggested changes. So I will post the revised one soon. Still hammering out details.Mel Chesleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08200734886454147170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10722111911442589.post-66002500361174797532010-04-30T20:42:40.913-07:002010-04-30T20:42:40.913-07:00Congrats on almost a hundred! The query sounds goo...Congrats on almost a hundred! The query sounds good to me. You say that's the early one?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13267066733031149882noreply@blogger.com